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Application Raegho
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August 29, 2011, 06:44:54 PM »
Details of your Orc character:
Name: Raegho Aeron
Class: Rogue
Level: 85
Tell us something about your (role)playing experience: I started wow in... Two years or three. I am pretty good RPer, but i don't know really much about Orcish RPing. I've been playing with Alliance.
And finally, please write a short story and/or IC introduction about your character:
Blademaster Aeron
Raegho born in a camp in Northern Barrens. His father and mother died, by a human thief group. His brother and Raegho, they were the only ones from his family. Raegho did have a good life to, his age five. But then his brother died by the same group too. He was looking for a safety place, to hide. But, he found a camp where was orcs. Raegho walked there and asked help. A orc without shirt look'd at him, and asked, what's wrong. Raegho told the story of him to the orc. The orc started train Raegho as a Blademaster. The first train using the blades, was kill the thief group. Raegho killed one of them, but he wasn't enough strong using both blades, so he dropped them down. His trainer saved him. He was training in Durotar with Trolls. When he was twelve, he met his old trainer again. Raegho told him that he is enough strong now. The blademaster said about his sword that the green sword means the Orcish race... And the black one, means the speed of the sword's user. Raegho took his own two swords from the ground and raised them to the air. He trained himself with a same aged Orc, who was training to be a blademaster too. They both were sixteen. Raegho and his partner killed the whole thief group, but the only one survived was Raegho. He look'd down, seeing a orc and blood on the ground. But then the age came. He was twenty-one. He got new swords. The last train was to kill his trainer. The did fight for an hour. They were away from eachother for awhile. The trainer fast look'd away, and while he look'd... Raegho came and killed him with his sword. Raegho look'd him for awhile and threw his own weapons away, taking his old trainer's owns. (I am not very good story writer.) (I am still a good RPer, but i don't know how to write 'Orcish' stories... I just started play an orc.) (And by the way if you guys think this was a stupid story... I can change the Northern Barrens to Durotar)
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Grekthar
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Re: Application Raegho
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August 29, 2011, 06:57:17 PM »
Interesting story.... I guess there could be different styles of training a blademaster, not done much research on that subject.
First point I'd say is...from an RP point, your guy can't have been born in the Northern Barrens and be 21 now. The orcs have only been there for about...nearly a decade whichever timeline you want to use.
Aside from that niggling point...not a bad story. What do the rest of you guys think?
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Re: Application Raegho
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August 30, 2011, 05:11:49 PM »
As Grek'thar said, you may want to revise a part of your story according to the lore. You can find a timeline on our application forums for this as well. The orcs have only been on Kalimdor for a good few years now (ten at most), so it'll be hard to be born in these lands yet.
It's a minor mistake a lot of new people tend to make, so I can let it slip for now. Since you say you're not much of a writer, I'd be willing to give you a shot in-game instead, so feel free to go on ahead and contact any Red Blade in-game so we can take care of your IC interview!
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