Hello there, and nice to see you give RP a try! Your application seems to be quite in order for a first try, though I'd like to add that you might want to be a bit careful in regards to your fel orc plot. The "real" fel orcs in Hellfire are usually crazed as a result of their "overdoses" of fel, so to speak. I suppose it's fine to have exceptions, though expect some orcs to perhaps question or distrust you in the beginning. Also, keep in mind Garrosh is war chief, and not Grom, and that's he's not a fel orc, though if that's a misconception from your character ICly, that's perfectly fine, of course.

Having said that, I think we'd be willing to give you a try! Contact any Red Blade in-game to point you towards an officer for an IC interview!