I can see why you changed your name, though I doubt any orc would have been really all that picky about it.

Still, it's nice to see that you're willing to keep such things into account!
As for your application, it's looking all fine to me. Warsong orcs were definitely captured and interned as well, so you needn't worry about that. Your story's a little short, but it gives us exactly the kind of details that we tend to look for in application. That means it's all looking fine to me, so feel quite free to poke any Red Blade in-game to have them point out an officer for you for an IC interview!