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Uhgar
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« on: February 16, 2013, 12:30:06 AM »

Name: Galetusk
Class: Death Knight
Level: 90


Tell us something about your (role)playing experience:
I don't really have much roleplay experience. My warrior is already in guild, though I kinda stopped playing after he joined.


And finally, please write a short story and/or IC introduction about your character:
Born and raised in orphanage. Not much is known about his parents, except that both have been slain by a dwarf paladin named Bhorim. From a young age Galetusk is trained as a warrior.  As he didn't stand out he's still very talented with a two handed axe.

One day a troll spoke to Galetusk that he overheard a conversation of two scouts which are ordered to assault this dwarf… and his name is Bhorim. Could he be the one, Galetusk wondered. In a few minutes Galetusk spoke to the scouts if he could join them. One of the scouts said: "Yes, but don't stand in our way. Meet us tomorrow at the southern gate, and we will travel together to Heartglen.

High in the mountains north of Heartglen
"Wake up!, wake up!" Galetusk feels someone is trying to wake him up. Its one of the scouts. We think something is happening. "Come here!" Galetusk kneels next to the other scout. No-one can see us here in the shade.  

A big alliance patrol enters Heartglen, it looks as they've just seen battle, some are wounded and some look exhausted. "There!, on the left!" Without ever seeing the paladin before, Galetusk just knows this is him. His blood begins to boil, his eyes begins to fill with rage! "RAAAAA" Galetusk runs down the small path leading to the center of Heartglen, in one lunge he tries to strike Bhorim with his giant axe……

Cling! Bhorim easily countered the attack. Immediately every single dwarf and human surrounds Galetusk. "You're here all by yourself? Hahaha" And with one holy blow to chest, Galetusk collapses to the ground.

A second chance.
Risen by the Lich King Galetusk now seeks his nemesis once more. Yet this time filled with blood, frost and unholy power.
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« Reply #1 on: February 16, 2013, 04:33:27 PM »

Hello Galetusk nice to see you've taken the time to make an application, however there are a few inconsistancies with it! For one Orgrimmar hasn't been there for very long at all, my time-line knowledge isn't amazing but it would make your orc early teens, 13ish at the most? Also Hearthglen is on a different continent to Orgrimmar but that may just be me nitpicking, I'll leave the verdict up to Koz' but just my two cents!

Have a good day Smiley
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Well it looks like the end is nigh for our friend here, he's finding it hard to keep his head.. Especially with this girl screaming in his ear! We've got to ask ourselves does he deserve this? Speak now or forever hold your peace.
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« Reply #2 on: February 16, 2013, 04:42:36 PM »

Thanks for the reply!. I could change the locations if necessary.
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« Reply #3 on: February 20, 2013, 07:23:43 PM »

Would love a reply!
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« Reply #4 on: February 20, 2013, 11:28:20 PM »

Like Mozrogg said, all you need is keep into account and fix the aforementioned points. Aside from that, you're already free to contact any Red Blade in-game for your IC interview and introduction!
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OH NOES WHY R ANIMALZ ON MUH FACEZ?!?!
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